The arrangement seems to just take the last two notes of the source's initial 3-note pattern, then just alternate those two notes the whole way through with some chorused/layered effects on them. Some generic sounds, but decent sound design to start, even though it all sounds default-y. :49 was the make-or-break moment, and it's just the addition of a very dry, vanilla synth line and plain drums on top of the pattern we heard before. A slow tempo, 1:44-long, it's not developed into much yet, unfortunately. Conceptually, there's nothing wrong with this in a vacuum, and the context of it being an opening for an album makes sense; "White Noiz" is pretty minimal and short, and this sticks with one section of it and then goes for an expansionist second half.

With all that context in mind, Marcos, there's no need to compromise the vision of this track for OC ReMix, but for here, we would need more sophisticated sound design than what's in place now, and more importantly, a more fully developed arrangement; even a gorgeous/pro audio production of this, I'd probably pass on because it's such a short idea; a slower track like this need some more time to be substantive, again just something we're pushing for with our Standards. Cool source tune choice, and I hope you continue improving your sound design.

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